Can we tell you how trippy it is being a fictional character? Of course we can. Man writers complain about rewrites? They should try being edited. You feel all sorts of weird happening to you. Reality (our reality) starts to unravel you never know what’s going to change. Is it your dialogue? Your hair? or are you suddenly going to have feathers? It is a most uncomfortable feeling, but now it is all over we feel even better. In the fictional sense, what doesn’t erase you only makes better. (Quite literally in Debbie’s case-Ryder)

RYDER I’ll have your Head!-Debbie

We are with Ryder- Randy and Joel


Children behave or more edits might come, by our suggestion– Becky and Cynthia

Now everyone is behaving themselves, the link to the first fifty pages, freshly edited is http://demeterseries.com/the-book.html


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